The thesis statement I've chosen for Essay 1 is the following.
Group work is very helpful in developing other academic skills.This is because in group work students can practice explaining what they want to say,listening to others opinions carefully and thinking ideas and opinions for myself.
Here's an adjusted version of your thesis statement. Please use this!!!
返信削除Group work is very helpful in developing other academic skills. This is because in group work students can practice explaining what they want to say, effectively listening to others opinions carefully, and thinking through ideas and opinions for themselves.